COOKIE MONSTAZ's Audience Pitch

Thursday the 15th of September at approximately 14:31pm:

Ophelia, Natalie, Tina and Joshua picthed their idea for their movie which they called " Cookie Monsta" to the rest of the class who were their audience.

First of all, we pitched our synopsis to the class, which was the beginning, middle and end. We explained the equilibrium, then the disruption, an attempt to solve the disruption and then the new equilibrium.

As a group, eplained to the class that our film title it " Cookie Monsta " because the main synergy is the cookie. The tagline of the film is ' Tough cookies don't break....dance? ' Also our film will be shown in multiplex cinemas. The storyline will be a single strand narrative as we want our audience to focus on one comedy aspect and to focus on the storyline at large.
To make our film into a comedy we are doing a parody of the following films; Rocky , The good the bad & the ugly, also scary movie.
Furthermore the certificate for the movie is 12A as the film is targeted at youths aged from 12-19 years of age. Which then illustrates the socio-economic grades for the movie which is Grade D & E. This groups include unepmloyed civilians such as students, causual labourers, semi skilled & unskilled manual workers etc....

Our main purpose of this film is to entertain, as is why we made our film a comedy.

Overall the feedback we got from the audience was very positive.

* The first critique we got back from the audience, was , how are we going to show the fight/dance scene and how are we going to show the crowd of people?
# As a group we explained that we are going to get our closest friends together and put them into a cirlce and then we are going to show close ups of each person's face. Also the place that we are going to do the fight/dance scene is going to be on the monoux football pitch so that there is going to be enough space to film.


* The second critique was the audience asked us about the title. The reason is because there are two main characters and the title was " Cookie Monsta ." The audience sugested that we should change the title from singular to plural.
# As a group we changed the title from " Cookie Monsta " to " Cookie Monstaz ". =]
- The audience liked the circular narrative, which connects the ending of the film to the beginning of the film. The idea of the ending was appealing to the audience.
- Comments :
                   * " Unique & out of the box ," the whole class said that.
                   * " Creative tagline, it is awesome ."
                   * " Can't wait to see it ," the whole class said that.

In all the whole class really liked our pitch & our movie idea. =]